中考英語作文技巧之突出句子重點

  相信有的同學,英語基礎很多,語法也不差,但英語作文就是不能得高分,這是什麼問題了,大部分都是整篇文章沒有突出重點,顯得太平淡,下面是小編為您收集整理的,供大家參考!

  

  句子的重點可以通過下列方法,加以突出:

  1. 把重點擺在句首或句尾。

  一般而論,最顯眼的位置是在“句尾,其次是在句首,中間的位置最平淡,乏善可陳。例如:

  ***1***Incorrect grammar and improper construction invariably distract readers‘attention.

  ***2***The history of vocabulary is,in many ways,the record of civilisation.

  把重點放在句尾是種“吊胃口”的方法,讀者或聽者非得讀完或聽完整句不可。

  2. 在複雜句裡,把主句放在從句之後。

  除了名詞從句和形容詞從句之外,因為它們位置較固定,副詞從句中有幾種的位置靈活,可以在主句之前出現,也可以跟在主句之後。通常我們就把這樣的副詞從句提前,重點則放在後頭的主句,如***3b***:

  ***3a***I came upon an old classmate when I went to town yesterday.

  ***3b***When I went to town yesterday,I came upon an old classmate.

  副詞短語更是如此,如 ***4b***:

  ***4a***Steel is commonly used to make knives,razors and other useful tools because of its durability.

  ***4b***Beacuse of its durability,steel is commonly used to make knives,razers and other useful tools.

  3. 把較重要或有分量的詞語放在後頭,如***5b***和***6b***:

  ***5a***I was delighted and amused by the classical opera

  ***5b***I was amused and delighted by the classical opera.

  ***6a***That singer‘s life was tragic and brief.

  ***6b***That singer‘s life was brief and tragic.

  4. 把句子中一系列的專案作邏輯性的排列。例如:

  ***7***Tony ate his dinner,watched TV,and then went to bed.

  ***8***Were you bored with years of study in elementary school,high school and institute of higher education?

  5. 必要時,重複重要的語詞或概念。例如:

  ***9***Jackie enjoys the company of ladies. He likes their beauty,he likes their delicacy,he likes their vivacity,and he likes their silence.

  ***10***……the land stretched out without names. Nameless headlands split the surf;nameless lakes reflected the nameless mountains and nameless rivers flowed through nameless valleys and nameless bays.

  6. 儘量用主動說態,因此***11b***比***11a***好:

  ***11a***A pedestrian was struck on the head by a flying stone.

  ***11b***A flying stone struck a pedestrian on the head.

  7. 適當時候,可用倒裝句和平行句,如:

  ***12***Seven dwarfs lived here in the centre of the dark forest. → Here,in the centre of the dark forest lived seven dwarfs.

  ***13***Severity breeds fear;roughness breeds hatred.

  ***14***Honesty recommends that I speak;self-interest demands that I remain silent.

  重陽節英語作文:重陽節來歷

  Double Ninth Festival

  The 9th day of the 9th lunar month is the traditional Chongyang Festival, or Double Ninth Festival. It usually falls in October in the Gregorian calendar. In an ancient and mysterious book Yi Jing, or The Book of Changes, number "6" was thought to be of Yin character, meaning feminine or negative, while number "9" was thought to be Yang, meaning masculine or positive. So the number nine in both month and day create the Double Ninth Festival, or Chongyang Festival. Chong in Chinese means "double." Also, as double ninth was pronounced the same as the word to signify "forever", both are "Jiu Jiu," the Chinese ancestors considered it an auspicious day worth celebration. That's why ancient Chinese began to celebrate this festival long time ago.

  The custom of ascending a height to avoid epidemics was passed down from long time ago. Therefore, the Double Ninth Festival is also called "Height Ascending Festival". The height people will reach is usually a mountain or a tower. Ancient literary figures have left many poems depicting the activity. Even today, people still swarm to famous or little known mountains on this day.

  On this day, people will eat Double Ninth Gao ***or Cake***. In Chinese, gao ***cake*** has the same pronunciation with gao ***height***. People do so just to hope progress in everything they are engaged in. There is no fixed ways for the Double Ninth Cake, but super cakes will have as many as nine layers, looking like a tower.

  The Double Ninth Festival is also a time when chrysanthemum blooms. China boasts diversified species of chrysanthemum and people have loved them since ancient times. So enjoying the flourishing chrysanthemum also becomes a key activity on this festival. Also, people will drink chrysanthemum wine. Women used to stick such a flower into their hair or hang its branches on windows or doors to avoid evilness.

  In 1989, the Chinese government decided the Double Ninth Festival as Seniors' Day. Since then, all government units, organizations and streets communities will organize an autumn trip each year for those who have retired from their posts. At the waterside or on the mountains, the seniors will find themselves merged into nature. Younger generations will bring elder ones to suburban areas or send gifts to them on this day.

  農曆九月九日,為傳統的重陽節。因為古老的《易經》中把“六”定為陰數,把“九”定為陽數,九月九日,日月並陽,兩九相重,故而叫重陽,也叫重九,古人認為是個值得慶賀的吉利日子,並且從很早就開始過此節日。

  在古代,民間在重陽有登高的風俗,故重陽節又叫“登高節”。相傳此風俗始於東漢。唐代文人所寫的登高詩很多,大多是寫重陽節的習俗;杜甫的七律《登高》,就是寫重陽登高的名篇。登高所到之處,沒有劃一的規定,一般是登高山、登高塔。

  在這一天,人們還有吃“重陽糕”的習俗。在漢語裡,“糕”與“高”同音,”,人們會用“吃糕”代替“登高”,祝願百事俱高。重陽糕又稱花糕、菊糕、五色糕,制無定法,較為隨意。最高的有九層,像一個塔。

  重陽節正是一年的金秋時節,菊花盛開,民間還把農曆九月稱為“菊月”,在菊花傲霜怒放的重陽節裡,觀賞菊花成了節日的一項重要內容,當然,人們也會喝一些菊花酒。女人會把茱萸插在頭上或掛在門口,可以避難消災。

  今天的重陽節,被賦予了新的含義,在***,我國把每年的九月九日定為老人節,傳統與現代巧妙地結合,成為尊老、敬老、愛老、助老的老年人的節日。全國各機關、團體、街道,往往都在此時組織從工作崗位上退下來的老人們秋遊賞景,或臨水玩樂,或登山健體,讓身心都沐浴在大自然的懷抱裡;不少家庭的晚輩也會攙扶著年老的長輩到郊外活動或為老人準備一些可口的飲食。