英語四級寫作優秀範文點評

　　大學英語四級寫作部分一直是考生獲取高分的攔路虎，也是制約學生獲取高分的瓶頸。要想打破這個瓶頸,在平時必須加強對寫作技巧的練習，只有多練才能在考試中寫出一篇好文章。下面小編為大家帶來，歡迎大家學習!

　　：關於度假

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How People Spend Their Holidays. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the table and the outline given below:

　　Year 1990 1995 2000

　　Traveling 37% 51% 76%

　　Staying at home 63% 49% 24%

　　1、根據上表，簡要描述1990年、1995年、2000年某城市人們度假方式的情況及其變化;

　　2、請說明發生這些變化的原因;

　　3、得出結論。

　　How People Spend Their Holidays

　　As is clearly shown in the table that there was a dramatic change in the way people spent their holidays between 1990 and 2000. Especially, in 1990, 63% of people spent their holidays at home, while the figure decreased considerably to 24% in 2000. there are three reasons for this phenomenon.

　　To begin with, with the development of market-oriented economy, people earn by far more money than they used to, making it possible for them to afford traveling expenses. In addition, people realize the importance of getting well-informed about the outside world in this modern era to develop their potential. For example, a traveller may encounter or talk with someone of a different cultural background so as to broaden his vision. Last but not least, by traveling outside, people are close to nature, which is not only beneficial to both their health and peace of mind. In short, more and more people take the occasion of holiday to travel outside and relax themselves.

　　As far as I am concerned, I prefer to go traveling instead of staying at home during holidays. On the one hand, I love meeting different people and take in some fresh ideas. On the other hand, it is agreed that the world is becoming a global village. No one could confine himself within his small circle of families or relatives. In brief, I have benefited a lot and will benefit more from traveling during the holidays.

　　點評：該篇作文屬圖表作文，命題思路與四級真題圖表作文一致，模擬度高。本預測題關於人們旅遊度假方式的變化，也是社會熱點話題，2006年1月就考過名校校園該不該成為旅遊景點話題;2004年6月也是關於旅遊景點的介紹。

　　：關於信用卡

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of

　　Credit Cards. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

　　1. 越來越多的人使用信用卡，信用卡有哪些好處

　　2. 信用卡的弊端

　　3. 你自己的觀點

　　Credit Cards

　　Personal credit cards are becoming more common in China. Banks and other financial institutions are encouraging their customers to change the way they buy things. Credit cards, otherwise known as “plastic money”, are being offered on very good terms to encourage the change. Consumers will be able to “buy now, pay later”, and many see this as an advantage.

　　But people need to be careful. There are dangers associated with credit cards. Some people find it very easy to exceed their budget. They are tempted to purchase goods that they do not really need, and can become quickly overburdened by debt. The credit cards often charge a high rate of interest, which exacerbates the problems for these people.

　　However, used wisely credit cards can improve the quality of people’s lives. They can give people access to money to meet sudden unplanned expenses. Properly handled, they can let people control their expenditure and the monthly statements provide a record of where their money has gone.

　　點評：這是一篇議論文，關於信用卡的利弊。可以分成三部分：第一部分，信用卡的好處，比如說應急等;第二部分，信用卡的一些弊端，比如說鼓勵一些無用的消費;第三部分：你自己的觀點，理性使用。