英語四級寫作範文點評

　　大學英語四級寫作部分一直是考生獲取高分的攔路虎，也是制約學生獲取高分的瓶頸。要想打破這個瓶頸,在平時必須加強對寫作技巧的練習，只有多練才能在考試中寫出一篇好文章。下面小編為大家帶來，歡迎大家學習!

　　：關於環境汙染

　　 this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:

　　Pollution: An Increasing Concern in China You should write at least120 words following the outline below in Chinese.

　　1. 中國的汙染的現狀

　　2. 造成汙染的原因

　　3. 解決的辦法

　　Pollution: An Increasing Concern in China

　　It is reported that ten big cities in China are being ranked among the top twenty cities with the highest pollution index in the world. This means it is high time we did something to bring the situation under control.Many factors are contributing to the deteriorating situation: industrial wastes pumped into the air, the lakes and rivers; a increasing number of automobiles crowding into the streets; the widespread use of plastic bags etc.

　　To my view, stiffer laws and regulations must be implemented to check pollution. Industries that release wastes without permission should be heavily fined. Cars should be equipped to minimize the exhaust they release into the air. And the use of plastic bags and disposable meal boxes should be banned. What’s more, the media should play an important role in implanting a sense of environmental consciousness into people’s mind. If everybody works toward a common goal of making the environment better, we can create a cleaner and lovelier world for us and for the coming generation.

　　點評：該預測題為社會熱點話題，也是四級命題作文經常關注的環境問題，值得引起重視。本文屬於解釋性說明文的寫作，主題是“汙染”。

　　：關於網路教育

　　 this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:

　　My View on Online Education.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.

　　1. 目前網路教育形成熱潮

　　2. 你認為這股熱潮形成的原因

　　3. 你對網路教育的評價

　　My View on Online Education.

　　Being online is no longer something new or fresh in our life. To some extent, it has become part of our daily life. We can do a lot of things online, such as searching for information and communicating with friends far away. But recently another helpful online activity has become very “in”. That is online education.

　　Why could online education be so popular within such a short period of time? Among other reasons, the quick development of the Internet should be an essential one, which makes all our dreams of attending class in the distance possible. Another underlying reason is the quick development of both society and technology. Today, modern science and technology is developing with fantastic speed. To catch up with this development we all feel an urgent and strong desire to study. However, due to the great pace of modern society, many people are too busy to study full time at school. Online education just comes to their aid.

　　Personally, I appreciate this new form of education. It’s indeed a helpful complement to the traditional educational means. It can provide different learners with more flexible and versatile ways of learning. Best of all, with online education, we can stick to our jobs and at the same time study and absorb the latest knowledge.

　　點評：英特網的迅速發展改變了人們的生活和學習、工作方式，現代生活節奏快、工作忙導致人們沒時間全日制的學習，網路和遠端教育正好滿足了人們的學習需要，許多大學生利用因特網學習知識，它成為傳統教學的有益補充。本預測題貼近時代，也與大學生校園生活相關，值得重視。