如何讓英語作文有亮點

  書面表達就是用書面的形式進行語言交際,它和口頭表達不同。它不能隨意發揮,也不能逐字逐句地翻譯所給的提示或參考材料,必須根據題目的要求和所給的情景進行表達,而且敘述議論必須明瞭得當,語言要準確,要符合書面語的規則。下面是小編整理的讓英語作文有亮點的方法,以供大家學習參考。

  

  一、遣詞貼切準確

  1.詞義準確

  例1:這個男人的病情危險。

  誤:The man is dangerous.***這個人是個危險分子。***

  正:The man is seriously ill.

  2.詞性適當

  例2:她做的實驗獲得了成功。

  正:She succeeded in carrying out the experiment.

  正:She was successful in carrying out the experiment.

  3.搭配無誤

  例3:我突然想到一個好主意。

  正:Suddenly I thought up a good idea.

  正:A good idea occurred to/struck/hit me.

  二、造句靈活多變

  1.熟用it句型

  例4:In our daily life,it is essential for us to form some good habits.

  it句型還有很多,同學們在日常寫作訓練中,如果能有意識地正確使用it句型,那麼會為文章增添不少色彩。

  2.學用複合句

  比較適宜使用複合句的兩種情況:

  ***1***簡單句較多時

  例5:Eighteen years ago,when Lin Shuhao was a little boy,he began playing basketball. He had gone through many hardships since he graduated from Harvard in 2011. But he trained himself as hard as possible,which led him to be a famous basketball player.

  使用複合句使前後的句子形成一個有機的整體,讀起來順暢自然。

  ***2***連線上下文時

  例6:Mr. John taught us how to learn English. What he said left deep impression on me. We’ve decided to speak more English in daily life because spoken English is very important in communication.

  使用複合句使句子之間關係緊湊、一氣呵成。

  3.會用強調句

  例7:It was your kindness and your money that helped me to go back to my senior high school.

  此句中強調句的運用使得作者的情感表現得更加強烈。同學們只要掌握了強調句的基本結構,並在寫作時熟練地運用,就能大大增強文章的感染力。

  4.巧用非謂語動詞

  同學們若能恰當地運用非謂語動詞對簡單句和複合句進行轉換,就會使句子讀起來更加形象、生動,從而傳遞出不同語境下的不同內涵。如:

  例8:Moved by the English teacher’s words,we were determined to study hard.

  例9:With so much work to do,I have no time for a holiday.

  三、謀篇連貫順暢

  同學們要恰當地運用平時積累下來的連線詞或過渡性短語來表示句與句之間、段與段之間的邏輯關係,以使文章連貫、緊湊、自然、流暢。

  例10:As we all know,vocabulary is the basis of a language. So mastering a number of words is of vital importance,which no doubt is beneficial to our writing. Besides,it’s necessary and useful for us to read beautiful English articles. Last but not the least,practice makes perfect.