敘事性英語範文

  單純的敘事,單純的寫一件事,這樣的英語作文我們如何寫?下面是小編給大家整理的,供大家參閱!

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  I was very happy during the National Day holiday.I spent a lot of time to play with my friends because I had little homework,I had finished it very soon.Although sometimes I feel bored,happiness was the mainstream.I liked to visit interesting places most.It was very nice.I like the National Day holiday.

  Yesterday I went to the shop to buy some fruit.I bought some apples bananas and many other fruit.when I got to pay for them ,I found that I forgot to take some money with me.So I have to went back home to bring the money and pay for the things.How unlucky the day was!

  Yesterday was a best day in my live.I went to the cinema to watch the movie call "Fantatic Four" with my classmate.Then we went to the supermarket to bought some meat and some vagetables.My mum was the best cooker in my family,and she cooked my favorite food for me.

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  I went back to my university campus last night. It was near twelve mid night. The sky was raining. While i was entering the lady toilet near the library building, I saw an image of an old man in one of the cubicle. I was shocked to see a man in lady toilet. My instinct told me this man could be a sex maniac. I raised my umbrella in a ready position in case I was attacked.

  Suddenly, the old man turned around. He smiled wickedly at me and said he is Confucius. I knew Confucius lived between 551 and 479 BC. What the hell was this old man doing in the lady toilet. Was he up to know good?

  In the next moment, he unzipped his pants and showed off his tiny penis. I immediately raised my umbrella and and whacked him hard on his penis. He yelled and vanished in thin air. I felt a sense of eerie.

  I ran out of the toilet in double time and went straight home..

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  It was Mother’s Day.Sun Zheng thought he should do something for his mother.He decided to help his mother do some housework.After school he went to a shop to buy some food on his way home.

  When he got home,he did his best to cook some nice food,though he couldn’t do the cooking well.Thenhe cleaned the room.He felt very tired,but he was very happy.

  When his father and his mother came back and saw the clean rooms and dishes which weren’t so nice,they were very happy.They had their supper together.His mother said,"Thank you,my child!"

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  一次愉快的旅行

  要求:以第一人稱手法按以下提示用英語寫一篇題為“一次愉快的旅行”的短文

  1 在假期,完成作業後,我同朋友乘公共汽車去旅行;

  2 到達目的地後,開始爬山;

  3 要描述山上的環境和遊人狀況;

  4 我們吃野餐;

  5 拍了照片,玩得很開心。

  A Pleasant Trip

  On holidays, after I finished my homework, I decided to go to Huqiu Hill with my friends. We took a bus to the beautiful place. We sat in the front of the bus to get to a good view of the countryside. It took us about an hour to get there.

  Then we began to climb the hill. There were many trees and flowers on the hill. And there were also many people on the hill. Some of them were walking slowly around the hill. Others were sitting on the benches and enjoying the scenery.

  At noon, we sat under the trees and had our picnic lunch. All the food was very delicious.

  We took many interesting photos during the trip. And we all enjoyed ourselves on that day.

  點評:本文文筆通順,過渡自然。按事件發展順序記敘了一次愉快的旅行,同時,向讀者展示了一幅農村好風光,以及人們在優美環境下悠閒、愉快地遊玩的情境。

  如何寫敘事英語作文

  敘事是記敘文體裁的主要表達方式。它常以社會生活硃紅發生的典型事件為主要敘述物件,以事件的經過為線索進行描述,突發事件的社會意義,以達到用事件來教育人鼓舞人或提醒人的目的。

  敘述文往往由時間、地點、人物、事件、原因和結果六個要素構成。一般來說,要把事件和人物活動寫清楚,這六個要素缺一不可。有時,根據表達的需要可省去原因或結果,但是時、地、人、事卻不能沒有。所以,在敘述文中,時間、地點、人物、事件最為重要,缺一不可。

  敘述當然要講究方法。從敘述的順序安排上來看,主要有順敘、倒敘、插敘、平敘等;從記敘的表達方法上來看,有詳敘、略敘;而敘述某些比較複雜的事件時,還常用到總敘和分敘的方法。

  在寫敘述文的時候同學們最好做到以下幾點:

  第一,構思巧妙、引人入勝。構思是作者在寫作前進行的一系列思索過程。構思巧妙就是文章的立意要新穎,組織材料和表達手法要巧妙,與眾不同。這樣才能使讀者感到有意思,愛不釋手。

  第二,結構完整,前後呼應。事件的前因後果、來龍去脈要清楚;文章的引言、擴充套件、結尾的結構要完整。文章的標題和內容要一致;文章的結尾與開頭要呼應。不能寫出前後矛盾、敘述斷裂的文章。

  第三,人稱清楚、線索連貫。記敘文可用“你、我、他”三種人稱。敘事時有時需要轉換人稱,但不能引起混亂,讓讀者分不清誰是誰。線索是把文章的全部材料組成一個有機體的脈絡,時間、人物和事件都可以成為線索,但必須前後連貫,不能割裂開來。

  總之,不管是怎樣的記敘,其總的要求是一要清楚,二要生動,能做到這兩條,文章幾不會差。

  

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