中考英語作文高分四訣竅

　　想要讓中考英語作文達到完美，我們只需要運用四個訣竅! 下面小編為大家分享的是的詳細內容，希望對你有幫助!

　　一、審題明確

　　首先必須理清寫作順序，有一個清晰的寫作脈絡，明白題目所涵蓋的內容。清楚這篇文章的體裁格式，用什麼時態，用第幾人稱，可以分幾段，之間用什麼過渡詞、連線詞。然後列出提綱，最後豐富自己的提綱就可以了。

　　通常一篇文章包括三個部分，開頭部分——說出文章的要點和核心，正文部分——圍繞主題展開敘述和討論，結尾部分——對全文進行總結和概括。

　　比如一篇作文題目叫“A trip”，很顯然這是一篇記敘文，是要寫一次短途旅行中發生的事情，而且已經發生過了。發生過的事情，且是自己親身經歷的，就用第一人稱和過去時。如果是去描述發生在他人身上的事情，就用第三人稱和過去時。

　　範文：

　　I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer.***開頭點題是去年發生的一次短途旅行***It was a good trip at the beginning but something unexpected happened on the half way.One of my friends suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldn’t move any further.Nobody knew what to do.One girl tried to call her mum with her mobile phone but there was no signal in the mountain area.Luckily we brought a tent with us.We put it up and let him rest in it.He took some medicine.Then he drank some water.and ate some food.After a while，he felt much better and we walked on.***描述在這次短途旅行中發生了意外的事情，最後大家是怎麼解決的***We all enjoyed ourselves on the top of the mountain.***最後再次總結這次旅行大家都很開心。***

　　二、用好連線詞

　　根據評分準則，有效地使用語句間的連線成分，使全文緊湊，是第五檔***21-25分***的要求之一。將句子用合適的詞連線成段落，並將前後的表述整理通順，是作文流暢緊湊的關鍵。

　　我們學過很多連線詞，例如：

　　表示羅列、增加：first, second, third, first, then, next, after that, what’s more, In addition, furthermore, moreover, another, also, especially, in particular

　　表示時間順序：now, at present, recently, after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days

　　表示解釋說明：now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, more over, furthermore, in fact, actually

　　表示轉折關係：but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contary, on the other hand

　　表示並列關係：or, and, also, too, not only…but also, as well as, both…and, either…or, neither...nor

　　表示因果關係：because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a result***of*** , otherwise, so…that, such…that

　　這些連詞都可以運用到寫作當中去。

　　下面我們再來看一篇範文。

　　Save Energy

　　To save energy，I’11 start from the following points.First，it’s best to catch a bus or ride a bike to school.Second，I will remember to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom.Next，in my free time，I will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling.Also I won’t spend too much money on expensive things. Last but not the least，I should stop the water tap running all the time.By doing all these，I hope I can do something for our society.

　　這篇作文就用了很多連線詞讓文章連貫而流暢。

　　你能一一找出來嗎?

　　三、詳略得當，突出重點

　　一篇洋洋灑灑卻毫無中心的作文無論如何是拿不到高分的。一篇優秀的英語作文，一定要有突出的中心思想，文章內容的安排要有詳有略。

　　在文章的框架確定後，對內容的選取是很關鍵的。選材要注意取捨，應該從表現文章主題的需要出發，分清主次，安排詳略。面面俱到使情節羅列化，導致作文平淡而缺乏重點。而突出重點，詳寫細述那些能表現文章主題的重要情節，略寫粗述那些非關鍵的次要情節，是寫好作文、表現主題的關鍵。我們可以來讀一篇滿分作文，以更深刻地瞭解怎樣突出作文的重點。 The Christmas Day

　　December 25th is the Christmas Day.Before Christmas, my friends suggested to have a party.But I don’t think it was creative enough.So we decided to go hiking to the country.On that day，my friends came to my house early.We all brought each other different kinds of gifts，such as books，cards，calendars，photo album，and Wanglin even sent me a stuffed pig.Soon we started our trip.We found it beautiful and funny to be out of the school.The cloud，the sunshine，the trees，flowers and the grass…all the things were interesting.They all said the Christmas was special and funny.

　　這篇記敘文，有詳有略地記敘了大家是怎樣度過聖誕節的。略寫了大家決定去郊遊，而詳細寫了互送禮物的情節和郊遊所見的景色。

　　四、常用點睛

　　正確地運用好複雜的詞彙和句型，會使你的作文生動形象，脫穎而出。

　　1.適當地使用片語、習語來代替單詞，避免適用重複的單詞

　　如表達“他興趣廣泛”，我們可以用：He has many interests.但是如果我們將“many”改為“a variety of”。He has a variety of interests.就顯得富有文采了。

　　為了避免使用某一個單詞，我們可以選擇它的同義詞來代替。如：I like reading while my sister likes playing football.這個句子中，用了兩個“like”，我們可以用“like”的同義詞“enjoy”代替其中一個“like”，句子變為：I like reading while my sister enjoys playing football.這樣，句子就生動一些了。

　　2.使用不同的句型，使句子豐富多彩起來

　　下面我們來看一篇運用了豐富句子的範文，來學習怎樣將句子寫好。

　　Study at School or at Home?

　　1、Thanks to the internet，we can study not only at school but also at home now.

　　2、Although many people think those who have online lessons are just copying their homework instead of leaning anything，information on the internet can be very useful if we are willing to get more knowledge.

　　3、 A teacher may be better for US to ask questions and to explain what we don’t understand.However，teachers in big classes are often not able to pay attention to every student，and some students may be afraid to communicate with the teachers.

　　4、So as for me, I prefer online learning to having classes at school.

　　句子1 ：改變了按主謂賓順序構成的句子開頭，將狀語提到句子的開頭，非常新穎。

　　句子 2 ：靈活運用了複雜句，包括賓語從句，if引導的原因狀語從句。

　　句子 3 ：賓語從句的運用，增加了句子的連續性，達到了更好的表達效果。

　　句子 4 ：“So as for me”很好地連線了上下文，概括總結了自己的觀點。

　　通過上面的總結，可見“審題明確”“用好連線詞”“詳略得當，突出重點”以及“常用點睛句”是英語作文獲得高分的訣竅。掌握好這四個訣竅，你也能寫出高分英語作文!