對雅思高分寫作產生重要影響的高分片語

　　寫作中，優秀的片語不僅會打動考官，更有可能為我們的雅思寫作成績加分。而且在雅思寫作四項評分標準中也做了比較合理的規定：內容準確合理，文章連貫，詞彙準確豐富和語法正確句式多元的文章會是高分作為的第一標準。因此，從理論上來說，片語的重要性不言而喻。下面是小編為您收集整理的，供大家參考!

　　大多數學生在經過相關的培訓之後對作文審題、內容和結構的安排、如何使用連線詞來使文章連貫都能有比較明確的瞭解。但是這兩項並不能保證學生能夠拿到六分或以上。除此之外還要求學生用詞準確，語法無誤或少錯誤。而豐富的詞彙和漂亮的句式則是幫助學生跨過到6分，6.5到7分的關鍵。

　　在和許多學生接觸的過程中，我們發現很多同學去背誦一些所謂的雅思詞彙卻不知道如何正確使用，就會出現表達生硬，用詞不當的情況。其實的所謂的難詞、難詞並不是幫助學生在詞彙方面獲得高分的決定因素，而是準確恰當，符合英語表達習慣的詞彙和片語才是關鍵。

　　我們看看一些學生用錯詞彙的例子：

　　緩解衝突：不恰當solve the conflict修改resolve the conflict.

　　分析觀點：不恰當pinpoint the argument修改analyse the argument.

　　分析事件：過分複雜anatomise***剖析***the issue修改analyse the issue.

　　致命疾病：不準確deathful disease修改deadly/fatal disease.

　　嚴重的問題：不正式terrible problem修改pressing/urgent problem.

　　光臨店鋪：不準確patronage the shop修改patronise/frequent the shop.

　　上升趨勢：不準確an increase trend修改a growing trend.

　　要學會如何準確用詞，首先要了解這個詞彙、片語使用的語境，而不是望文生義的記背單詞，然後按照中式思維，生搬硬套，胡亂搭配，往往出錯。如何去恰當的用詞呢?首先，閱讀。在閱讀一篇文章的時候，學生可以看到一些詞彙是如何搭配，在什麼樣的上下文中準確使用，在什麼語境下意思不同等等。唯有如此，才能完全掌握一個詞彙或者片語的使用方法。

　　其次，閱讀之後記下符合英語表達習慣的片語，也就是collocation。這是體現作者英文功底的關鍵。

　　比如說：存錢去做什麼事情?

　　學生常用save the money for sth。

　　但是通過閱讀，我們會發現，英語母語使用者會說put moneyaside for sth。

　　比如說成績。

　　學生往往用score/mark。

　　而準確的表達應該是：academic performance/school performance。

　　又比如，學習知識。

　　學生第一反映總是：learn knowledg。

　　而這並不符合英語的表達習慣，正確的應該是：acquire knowledge。

　　這類例子不勝列舉，無法準確使用詞彙和片語也就成為限制學生獲得高分的一大因素。

　　所以學生要提高自己的雅思作文成績，就不能按照死記硬背的方式來學習，而是通過閱讀和熟悉使用一些地道的英語片語。這是任重道遠的事情。

　　傳統藝術是否應該被政府資助?

　　Nowadays there is a growing tendency that some traditional arts are disappearing far away from modern society. some people claimed that the traditional arts are outdated and not worth of funding them. In fact, they are the symbol of a country’s civilization. I strongly believed that government should support them in different ways.

　　It is a well-known fact that the traditional arts are the most basic part of a national culture. Learning the traditional arts is one of the best manner to study our own brilliant culture and splendid history. It is due to that arts reflects on the one hand the political values of people and their religious beliefs, emotions and daily activities on the other. Thus, government plays a vital part in supporting musicians, artists, and drama companies to stimulate their enthusiasm of creating and inherting arts elements. Then the different forms of arts civilized our nation.

　　Furthermore, in consequence of subsiding people engaged in the art field, government provide a reasonable wise for people to enrich their lives and spirit. It leads to their bodies and minds relaxed from hard working. Thereby, they fully concentrate on working and laboring efficiently. Obviously, the direct outcome is they bring lots of benefits and interesting to the nation Taking one with another, the reward is far more than the payout.

　　However, it is not the only way to backup the arts development via spending money. There are still so many different ways except that. For instance, the government should make policy that selective courses like drawing and music must be included in school curricular; the government should make propoganda in media in order to arouse the public interests in enjoying traditional arts; the government should sponsor the concerts, exhibitions and musium about traditional arts for free and as frequently as possible. In breif, the purpose is to give people more opportunities to get touch with traditional arts. The more people appreciate it, the faster the traditional arts promoted.

　　To sum up, it is necessary for a nation to develop his own traditional art. The government should strive to protect them in various ways. In the end, the country will definitely become more vivid and stronger than in previous time.

　　點評：長句子用了不少，觀點表達的很鮮明，基本上有理有據。

　　但是，關於國家持傳統藝術的分類範圍略小了一點，比如物質的有文物，古建築，非物質的有民俗文化、古籍著作很豐富的，如果能夠把內容完善起來，寫出來的文章就從切入點上拔高了許多。