如何寫出英語高分作文

  英語作文是一項綜合能力的考試,主要是考學生對詞彙、語法和句子結構以及連句成文的掌握程度。筆者認為,要想讓學生在規定的30分鐘內寫出一篇較好的作文,教師應該在平時的課堂教學中認真指導學生注重審題、切題、連貫通順、語法正確、語言規範這五個環節。本文旨在談談在寫出英語高分作文這個方面的具體作法。

  

  一、寫作訣竅

  總體把握,要點齊全;人稱時態,邏輯清楚;

  關鍵詞彙,動詞第一;組詞成句,結構完整;

  組句成文,連詞增色;此路不通,繞道迂迴;

  字跡工整,留好印象;從句適量,高分有望。

  二、寫作步驟

  1.認真審題。審題包括要點、格式、詞數以及此篇文章要傳遞給讀者什麼樣的資訊,告誡讀者什麼***即寫作目的***。

  2.確定文體和時態。確定文體後,根據不同文體的特點和要求進行組織材料;同時確定出該篇文章的總時態與時態的變化。

  3.寫完要點,但不隨意發揮。

  4.先草稿,後抄寫。

  三、習作點評

  [2004年全國中學生英語能力競賽初賽初三組] ***14分***

  Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. tell the magazine readers.

  ﹒what exactly your hobby is;

  ﹒when and how you became interested in this hobby;

  ﹒why you enjoy your hobby;

  ﹒about your hopes and plans for the future.

  寫作要求:

  1. 根據所提供的內容,適當拓展想象空間,靈活地將提供的資訊體現在文章中。

  2. 條理清楚,語句通順,書寫清晰、規範。

  3. 詞數60-80。

  [學生習作a]

  My hobby is read books. when i was seven years old .

  I became interested in reading books. I like needing books

  Because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can learn

  a lot of knowledge from books. Books also can teach me

  how to be a good person . Books even can solve many

  problems for me . I will read more good books to improve

  myself.

  ①改為reading books,動詞作表語時應該用動名詞。

  ②also的位置應放在can之後。

  [點評]:檔次9-11分。

  ①要點不全,漏掉最後一個要點。

  ②句子基本無誤,能正確傳遞資訊給讀者但文章不流暢,句子與句子之間過渡不自然,給讀者感覺在回答上述① ② ③問題。

  ③有少量錯誤。

  [學生習作b]

  My hobby is reading .reading books is very enjoyable .

  When I was young, my mother used to tell me a story before

  I went to bed every night .the stories were so interesting

  that I always felt they weren't enough . So I began to read

  books by myself .little by little I became interested in

  reading . I can learn much knowledge and many interesting

  things all over the world .when I read books , I can enjoy the

  beautiful sentences . At the same time I can improve my

  writing . I want to be a writer in the future, so I must study

  hard and read more books so that my dream can come true .