從閱讀文章到雅思寫作高分

　　雅思培訓專家指出：通過在課堂上與學生的接觸，課後對學生作文進行的批改，發現了絕大多數學生雅思寫作分數提不上去的主要原因是雅思詞彙匱乏、句式單一以及觀點空白這些問題。因此專家老師從詞彙書、寫作書等資料中選取了一些材料作為課外的補充材料，但仍然覺得不夠充足。下面是小編為您收集整理的，供大家參考!

　　雅思培訓：

　　這篇文章具體分析如何將閱讀文章中的用詞、句式和思路等套用到雅思寫作中去。

　　1、寫作中的用詞

　　在寫雅思辯論文時，考生在文章中可能要多次表明觀點，比如引言段可能要引用別人的觀點，正文段或者結尾段要表明自己的觀點。在引用觀點時，學生動輒"some people think…"，表達相對單調，缺乏生動多樣。而劍橋四中的兩篇閱讀文章就給了很多關於引用別人觀點的詞彙。比如 Lost for Words 中用到了" ...says Mark Pagel, according to Michael Krauss..., Salikoko Mufwene argues that..., "。又如Play is A Serious Business 一文中用到了" Byers point out that..., Sergio Pellis reported that..., Robert Barton believes that..., I concluded that...,"等。這些句子中的 says, according to, argue , report, believe 和 conclude等動詞都是可以用在雅思寫作中引出各方觀點的很好的表達。

　　再比如劍四Test 1 第三篇閱讀文章 Visual Symbols and the Blind 中的一個段落，在表達同一個意思時，作者用到了不同的詞彙，學生也可以適當積累這些詞彙，將它們運用到自己的文章中，滿足詞彙多樣性這個要求。

　　" ... Most guessed that the curved spokes indicated that the wheel was spinning steadily; the wavy spokes, they thought, suggested that the wheel was wobbling; and the bent spokes were taken as a sign that the wheel was jerking. Subjects assumed that spokes extending beyond the wheel's perimeter signified that the wheel had its brakes on and that ....."

　　在這一段話中，有好幾個單詞都是表示‘說明，暗示’的意思，比如 indicate, suggest, taken as a sign that 和 signify，這些動詞可以替換著在寫作中出現，因此只要注意閱讀文章中的用詞，對雅思寫作詞彙多樣性的提高也是有很大幫助的。

　　2、雅思寫作中句式的運用

　　劍橋雅思中的一些文章還可以為學生提供一些句式變化的模板。比如許多學生不太熟悉流程圖，對於如何描述其過程極為擔心。雅思培訓專家分析發現，這樣的句式在劍橋雅思說明性的閱讀文章中屢見不鮮，這類閱讀文章常常涉及某個事物的發展過程或者製作方式，其遣詞造句都是可以進行學習和利用的。劍五Test 2 Reading passage 1是一篇關於現代塑料的說明文章，其中有一段就是對塑料製作過程的描述，裡面有很多的句式都可以用在流程圖的描寫中。

　　"The original patent outlined a three-stage process, in which phenol and formaldehyde were initially combined under vacuum inside a large egg-shaped kettle...The resin was allowed to cool in shallow trays until it hardened, and then broken up and ground into powder. Other substances were then introduced, including...In the last stage, the heated Bakelite was poured into a hollow mould of the required shape..."

　　段落的第一句介紹了酚醛樹脂生產工藝的總體步驟，學生完全可以根據這個句式來描寫雅思真題中一道關於玻璃瓶回收過程的題目，如 "The diagram outline a three-stage process of glass recycling, in which the used bottles are collected and re-produced in the plant." 緊接著，作者將製作過程中的細節按照先後順序鋪開，描寫過程時結合了被動語態和準確的詞彙表達。其中的"cool, break, grind, pour"等動詞都是在工作流程中的高頻詞彙。"then, in the last stage"也可以作為極好的連線過渡詞。學生可以將這些詞彙用到玻璃瓶回收等這一類過程圖描寫的正文段中。

　　3、雅思寫作中思路的重要性

　　雅思閱讀文章和雅思寫作題目在話題上也存在很多重合，比如經常重合的話題有：環境、社會、教育、文化這四大方面，因此雅思閱讀文章的內容能幫助考生更好的積累觀點素材。在雅思考試備考過程中，考生完全可以將閱讀文章中的觀點或者例子用到自己的寫作中去。比如劍四Test 2的Reading passage 1 "Lost for Words" 這篇文章就極好的回答了一道較難的雅思文化類考題：What are the reasons for the loss of many cultures and languages? How to solve this problem?

　　這篇閱讀文章的結構是遵循“背景—原因—解決方式”的架構來安排的，在文章的前面部分分析了語言消失的原因：

　　1. "What makes a language endangered is not just the number of speakers, but how old they are. If it is spoken by children, it is relatively safe. The critically endangered languages are those that are only spoken by the elderly,.."

　　2. "Why do people reject the language of their parents? It begins with a crisis of confidence, when a small community finds itself alongside a larger, wealthier society...people lose faith in their culture."

　　3. "Quite often, governments try to kill off a minority language by banning its use in public or discouraging its use in schools, all to promote national unity."

　　4. "Salikoko Mufwene...argues that the deadliest weapon is not government policy but economic globalization."

　　這些都十分準確而又全面的回答了許多語言喪失的原因，而這篇文章在後文也對如何解決這一問題做出了回答：

　　"…a growing interest in cultural identity may prevent the direst prediction from coming true…. The key to fostering diversity is for people to learn their ancestral tongue, as well as the dominant language, ’apprentice’ programs have provided life support several indigenous languages. But a written form is essential for this, so the mere possibility of revival has led many speakers of endangered languages to develop systems of writing where none existed before."

　　雅思寫作：現在孩子生活的壓力比過去大嗎

　　每個家長都希望自己的孩子成龍，成鳳，不要輸在起跑線上。那麼正是因為這份期盼，孩子們的壓力，家長們想過麼?這篇雅思寫作範文正好也是和這個話題有關，大家一起來閱讀吧。

　　Today's children are living under more pressure from the society than children I the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with those opinions?

　　In this day and age, heated debate has been going on about whether children in earlier times are more stressful than current children.

　　There are ample reasons for someone to proclaim that children live in modern society assume more stress. First of all, with a vast number of opportunities offered by universities, youths are more accessible to receive tertiary education. As a consequence, they would be confronted with cruel competitions among peers. And they also learn a wide array of subjects involve in many fields. Moreover, the increasing number of undergraduates is accompanied with degrees' less values. It is generally accepted that decent jobs are hard to find an present. Besides, families tend to have only one child, when children grow up, they shoulder obligations of taking care of their parents without cousins' assistance. Lastly, people are materialistic. They pursue high stand of consuming, and impart this attitude to their children, and children are living in the shadow of profits and money, which render them worried about salaries in the future,

　　On the other hand, it is worth pointing out that there are also arguments supporting the opinion that children are afflicted with more pressure several decades ago. The main one may be individuals used to pursue survivals simply. For instance, people were enduring starvation and misery in 1960s in China, the majority of them even couldn't survival. Thus, meeting foundational demands seemed to be pretty difficult for them. In addition, when economic developed somewhat better, few of adolescents had chance to receive high education. It was hard to be outstanding among massive amount of people. Notwithstanding this, an apparent problem with this opinion is that children nowadays have similar standard of education which breeds peer pressure easily. Consequently, we should not overlook the fact that pursuing materials is harder than satisfying basic needs.

　　By way of conclusion, regarding this issue, my opinion is that children live in different eras encounter situations differently. An individual could not experience childhoods in distinct ages. Also, I would argue that it seems highly advisable for the psychological organizations to dedicate more energy to children's mental well-beings.

　　希望所有的孩子都可以快樂的學習，幸福的生活，有書有陽光!