大學英語改寫句子練習
字→詞→句→段→篇 是語言文字運用的基本流程,在這個流程中,句子訓練處於字詞和段篇訓練之間,句子既是字詞教學的昇華,又是段篇教學的起點,起著承上啟下的作用。下面是小編帶來的大學英語改寫句子練習，歡迎閱讀!
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改寫病句
串句
串句：錯誤將兩個獨立的分句串在一起，不用連詞、標點，誤將兩個句子當成一個句子。
型別：1。用一個逗號把兩個獨立的句子連線起來。2。什麼標點符號都沒有使用。 破句
破句：是一組詞由於缺少主語或動詞無法表達完整意思的錯句。只是句子的一個從屬部分
型別：從屬詞破句，分詞、不定式破句，附加細節句，無主破句。 1st: 修改串句：4 ways
分成兩個句子
誤 The local tire plant shut down for the holiday everyone had two weeks off.
正 The local tire plant shut down for the holiday. As a result, everyone had two weeks off.
誤 She didn’t feel particularly well she went to bed.
正 She didn’t feel particularly well. Therefore，she went to bed.
誤 He tried many times to give up smoking he never managed to.
正 He tried many times to give up smoking. However, he never managed to. 用連詞and, but, for, or, nor, so, yet連線兩個句子，連詞之前加逗號。 ***誤***Don’t tease the dog you might get bitten.
***正*** Don’t tease the dog, or you might get bitten.
用分號連線兩個句子
1.He tried many times to give up smoking; however, he never managed to.
2.The local tire plant shut down for the holiday; as a result, everyone had two weeks off.
用從屬連詞把一個分句化為從句，修飾或限定主句
After we walked over to the waterfall slowly, we sat down to admire the beauty of the falls.
There is no school tomorrow, so they will go on a picnic.
最佳方法修改串句
首選逗號加並列連詞，用於兩句之間有邏輯關係的句子;
其次選擇分號，用於兩句中有表示連線關係的副詞或副詞片語時或後句是前句的說明時;
最後考慮句號，用於兩句沒有邏輯關係或角度表化等情況。
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修改破句：4類
類1：從屬詞破句
***誤***Smokers claim the right to smoke in public places. While nonsmokers claim the right to clean air.
***正***Smokers claim the right to smoke in public places while nonsmokers claim the right to clean air.
***誤***Examinations remain as primitive as ever before. No matter how advanced our science and technology have become in this modern society.
***正***Examinations remain as primitive as ever before no matter how advanced our science and technology have become in this modern society.
***誤***After I arrived in Chicago by bus. I checked into a room. Then I went to a dinner to get something to eat.
***正***After I arrived in Chicago by bus, I checked into a room, and then I went to a dinner to get something to eat.
***誤***My daughter likes to make paper boats. Which she floats in the tub during her nightly bath.
***正***My daughter likes to make paper boats which she floats in the tub during her nightly bath.
***正***My daughter likes to make paper boats. She floats them in the tub during her nightly bath.
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分詞和不定式破句
修改方法
***1***讓破句與其前或其後的句子連線起來，使語義完整
***2***增添主語，把現在分詞改成動詞的正確形式;
***3***把being 改為be的恰當形式;
***4***將不定式部分與前面句子連線起來。
***誤***Starting at the clock on the far wall. I nervously began my speech. I was afraid to look at any of the people in the room.
***正*** Starting at the clock on the far wall, I nervously began my speech. I was afraid to look at any of the people in the room.
***誤***I spent almost two hours on the phone yesterday. Trying to find a garage to repair my car. Eventually I had to have it towed to a garage in another town.
***正***I spent almost two hours on the phone yesterday, trying to find a garage to repair my car. Eventually I had to have it towed to a garage in another town.
***誤***I plan on working overtime. To get this job finished. Otherwise, my boss may get angry with.
***正***I plan on working overtime to get this job finished. Otherwise, my boss may get angry with.
增加細節引起的破句
especially, specially, for example, such as, for instance, like, also, as well as, except, but, besides後接n.時, 不能單獨存在，只能是句子的部分。
修改方法：
***1***與其前面具有完整意義的句子連線起來;
***2***增加主語和謂語動詞;***3***改動, 使其成為前句的一部分。
***誤***My aunt likes watching daytime television shows. Especially old movies and soap operas.
***正***My aunt likes watching daytime television shows, especially old movies and soap operas.
***誤***Student cheating is still widely practiced. In spite of the fact that the violators get severe punishment once they are caught.
***正***Student cheating is still widely practiced in spite of the fact that the violators get severe punishment once they are caught.
***誤***He failed a number of courses before he earned his degree. Among them, English, Economics, and General Biology.
***正***Among the courses he failed before he earned his degree were English, Economics, and General Biology.
***誤***Cotton grows well in their county. Particularly in Vanguard Commune. ***正***Cotton grows well in their county, particularly in Vanguard Commune.
類4：缺少主語的破句
改正方法為：
a.使破句依附於前面的句子
b.增加主語***該主語往往是代詞，指代前句中的主語***
***誤***They take an active part in social activities. On holidays, frequently do temporary jobs.
***正***They take an active part in social activities, and on holidays, they frequently do temporary jobs.
***誤***One example of my father’s generosity is that he visits sick friends in the hospital. And takes along get-well cards with a few dollars folded in them.在慰問卡里塞錢
***正***One example of my father’s generosity is that he visits sick friends in the hospital and takes along get-well cards with a few dollars folded in the
***正***One example of my father’s generosity is that he visits sick friends in the hospital. He takes along get-well cards with a few dollars folded in them.
***誤***Sarah looked with admiration at the stunningly attractive model. And wondered how the model looked upon waking up in the morning.
***正***Sarah looked with admiration at the stunningly attractive model and wondered how the model looked upon waking up in the morning.