中考英語作文及範文
在中考英語中,作文是需要考生重點複習的。今天,小編為大家整理了,歡迎閱讀。
中考英語寫作概述和指導
根據《英語學科教學基本要求與訓練》,要求中學生能對人物、事件、物件和場所等作簡單的描述和議論,內容貼切,意思連貫,不少於60個詞。並且能填寫表格,能寫簡單的便條、信件和日記。英語寫作是體現學生英語水平和能力的重要表現形式
綜觀近年中考的書面表達題目,一般有三種體裁,分別是記敘文、說明文、應用文***寫信、告示、邀請函等***。看圖寫話是初中英語作文常考的一種形式,隨著上海英語教材的多樣化,學生的寫作能力有了較大的提高,因此中考作文的要求和難度也相應提高。但它是一種情景作文,多數是以記一次活動或一件事為主。也有其他可能。考生一定要認真審題,理解圖意,注意提示的圖片內容或提示詞,分清體裁,準確地進行描述。
怎樣才能寫出好文章?我覺得我們應從文章的取材、文章的結構與佈局以及語言表達等幾個方面考慮。
下筆前,要認真審題,仔細閱讀前面的中文提示以確定文章的主題和體裁。寫作時,要切記“鳳頭、豬肚、豹尾”的要領。要想寫好中考作文要做到:第一,審題要準,然後,定文體、定人稱、定中心句,切不可丟三落四。第二,根據已經確定的要點,先寫什麼,後寫什麼,需要用哪些單詞、片語、句型等,都要心中有數。動筆寫時,要多用學過的詞彙,儘量不出現語法錯誤,如:名詞的單複數、所有格等;句子結構、語序、標點等都要準確無誤。第三,要理順全文,然後再檢查一下文章格式是否正確、要點是否齊全、開放式作文還需要再想一想觀點是否正確等。最後要保持卷面整潔,還要發揮自己的聰明才智、觀察力、想象力和創造力寫好句子,這樣會增強文章的可讀性,使文章具有感染力。這看似簡單,但做起來很難,我們要多寫多練。
中考英語作文型別及範文
一、記敘文及範文點評
記敘文記人敘事,初中英語記敘文與語文中的記敘文是相通的,耍弄清是寫人、寫事。初中學生的英語寫作處於入門階段,寫人作文只是介紹性的,但要重點突出,用詞力求準確貼切,多用簡單句,適當使用複合句。
寫人可以寫的方面很多,如介紹姓名、年齡、職業、興趣愛好、外貌、特長等,常見的句式如:
This is my friend, Mary.
She is ... years old.
She is a teacher/an artist/a singer...
She/He gets up at 6/5 ... /early/late.
She/He has sports at school.
She/He likes...
She/He is strong/fat/slim/kind/thin...
She/He looks like...
She/He is good at English/maths/Chinese/physics...
範文1
My Best Friend
My best friend is one of my classmates. Her name is Mary. Every day, we go to school together and go back home together. We often help each other and learn from each other in study. We have the same hobby-collecting stamps. She has many nice stamps. She is very proud of them. Sometimes she gives some of them to me. I think she is a very- good girl. We will be good friends forever.
點評:這是一篇記人的敘述文。先交代了My Best Friend是誰,接著通過事例交代了為什麼“我們是最好的朋友”。最後闡述了主題。
範文2
My Class Teacher
My class teacher is Mr. Wang. He is strict but kind. He has taught us Chinese for two years. He always tells us to study hard but not all the time. Sometimes he plays with us. He says, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” I think he is a good class teacher.
點評:這篇文章取材都是身邊熟悉的人,作者也有東西可寫,更具有可讀性。另外,寫人時可以把主語稍作調整,讀起來輕鬆多了。
I am a 15-year-old girl. My name is Cherry. Now I am studying in the middle school.1 want to be an actress because I think It is a funny and exciting job...
寫事一定要交代時間、地點、人物、情節。常用的句型如:
It took place/happened…
Last/week/year/Monday/Tuesday...
One Friday morning..
範文3
Our Class Meeting
Last Friday afternoon we had our last class meeting in our classroom. All the students and our class teacher took part in it. We held a warm discussion about our future life. Each of us spoke at the meeting actively. After the discussion, we all decided to study hard so as to make our life better and better.
點評:這篇文章條理清楚,記敘完整,短短的五句話有簡單句,也有複合句,交代了時間、地點、人物、原因、經過、結果等六要素。
範文4
Hot Springs Let Me Have A Rest
We took off our coats and ran quickly into the lemon spring. When I first put my feet into the water. I cried out, "Wow, it is hot!”I didn't know the water was so hot, and I was a little afraid that it would burn me... So I walked carefully into the spring. One step, two... I felt the heat slowly climbing up my body.
點評:要寫出生動有趣的事,除了把事情的來龍去脈說清楚,還一定要注意增加文章的細節,這是必不可少的,豐富的細節描寫能為你的文章增色不少,使人讀起來具有一種身臨其境的感覺。
二、說明文及範文點評
說明文是就某一件事說明清楚,一般總是以空間順序展開的,可以自上而下,自左而右,從裡到外,從整體到區域性等等。寫物的文章常用“某處有某物”的句子表示物的存在。
常用的句型如:
There be...
I have got a/an...
It is-red/green/colour/round...
I like…best.
It looks like...
I like it very much.
I will keep it for ever.
範文1
Our Language Lab
There is a language lab in our school. It's on the third floor. It's big and clean. There are 50 desks and 50 chairs in it. There are 50 computers and a control desk***操縱檯***in it. There are50 headphones***耳機***on the desk. Every week we have our English lessons here. We watch slides, TV, video and listen to tapes. Then the teacher asks us questions. We like our language lab and always keep it clean and tidy.
點評:這篇文章寫了“我們的語音室”,按照一定的空間順序,先寫裝置,再寫功能,讓人對語音室的概貌有一個全面,準確的瞭解。
範文2
Our Housing Estate
There are many nice housing estates in Pudong New Area. Our Housing estate Rainbow Estate is one of them. You can see three blocks in the middle. There is a beautiful garden in front of Block 2.In the garden there is a fountain. There is a shop on the right of Block 1.A big playground lies on the left of Block 3. You can see many men, women, boys and girls having exercise there. There is a small kindergarten in our housing estate. It is convenient and comfortable for us to live in our housing estate.
三、議論文及範文點評
議論文要有自己的觀點,要有論證過程,強調觀點。常用的句型如:
1. 論點
Computer is important.
We must learn English well.
It's very important for us to...
In my opinion...
2. 論證過程常用一些銜接詞可使文章讀起來流暢,緊湊。如:
Firstly...Secondly…,Lastly ... Above all等
3.結尾強調觀點,最好用不同的句型來表達相同的觀點,如:
So we must...
So it's very important for us to...
I believe...
We should...
範文1
Why Are Trees Important?
Trees are very important to us. Do you know why? Let me tell you.
Trees take in carbon dioxide from the air and make oxygen. That's important. People and animals need oxygen to live. Many small animals and insects live in the trees. Some of them also get food from trees. Trees can also stop water and soil from going away. If we have a lot of trees, we stop deserts from being large. I think this is very important. You know, trees are green. They can make our country even more beautiful.
Trees are our good friends. We should plant more trees and take good care of them.
點評:文章先闡明論點,接著論證,最後重申自己的觀點。
範文2
It's Our Duty To Protect Our Environment
It's our duty to protect our environment. Where we live? The earth. The earth is the only one place we live in. So you know how important the environment is. But now, some people are harming the environment, like cutting down trees, drawing pictures on public walls, littering onto the ground. It's terrible if we still do it. Now, it's time for all the people in the society to protect the environment. It's our duty. It needs each of us to make a contribution to improving the environment. We should make our environment more and more beautiful.
點評:作者多用學過的詞語不但保證了正確,還鞏固了所學的知識,並且注意句型的多樣化,如長句,短句,疑問句,使用了“if,so, now, but”等詞,整篇文章讀起來朗朗上口。實際上,寫文章就像串珠子,連線詞就在於把一個個單詞串起來。
四、應用文及範文點評
要了解掌握各種應用文的文體、格式、各種文體的常用語句。寫信時,發信人的地址和發信日期寫在信的右上角。信的左邊寫稱呼,如“Dear+頭銜+姓”或“Dear+名"Dear Tom, Dear Mr. White…
信的正文一般分為幾個段落,結尾另起一行,寫With best wishes! 信的結束語一般用Yours, Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully...
日期寫法有月,日,年或日,月,年如2005年5月18日,May. 18, 2005 18 May, 2005
寫信常用的句子開頭有:
I haven't heard from you for a long time...
How's everything going with you?
I'm now writing to you. /I miss you so much.
Thank you for your letter.
I have received your letter.
結尾有:
I hope I can see you soon.
Give my best/warmest regards to..
I'll write to you soon.
初中寫信題目多為提供情景寫信,如2000年中考題目***根據所給情景寫封回信,至少50個單詞,要求內容切題,意思連貫。***
Situation: Aihua's aunt is now in Australia. She went there ten years ago. In her letter she wants very much to know what Shanghai is like now.
又如2004年某省中考題目:根據美國朋友Bob來信的內容寫一篇英文回信。
範文1
Dear friend,
Hello, I'm your new friend. My name is Bob. I'm fifteen. I'm American. I live in New York.
I am a middle school student. I'm good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friend and I often sing pop songs together.
After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the
Internet. Now I am learning Chinese. I hope l will visit your country one day.
Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Bob
點評:仔細審題,瞭解Bob想知道你哪方面的情況,要有針對性地回信,注意寫回信的格式。
範文2
Dear Bob,
Yesterday I heard from you. I am very glad to be your pen friend. My name is Peter Zhang. I am sixteen years old. I live in…
I am a middle school student, too. I like English and maths very much. I also like sports. I am good at singing. I know a little about America. Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter?
Please write to me soon.
Yours
Peter Zhang
點評:回信語言簡潔,明瞭,句子間的銜接自然,緊湊,文中作者把自己的情況大致向美國朋友作了介紹,達到了寫回信的目的。
假如你陪你校的外籍教師Smith先生去音樂廳聽音樂,在門口的布告欄裡看見一張觀眾須知,內容如下:
觀眾須知
1.一人一票,憑票入場;
2.場內嚴禁吸菸;
3.食品和飲料請勿帶進場內;
4.演出時請勿照相;
5.演出時請勿使用傳呼機和行動電話;
6.提前30分鐘入場。
Smith先生不懂中文,他很想知道布告欄裡寫著什麼。現在,請你把觀眾須知的內容用英語告訴Smith先生,並把要講的話寫下來。
範文3
Mr. Smith, it is a notice to the audience. It says that we should enter the concert hall 30 minutes earlier before the concert starts. Entrance to the hall is by ticket only, each one each ticket. As a rule, food or drink should not be taken into the hall. Of course, smoking is not allowed in the hall either. Please don't bring your digital camera with you because no photos can be taken during the concert. And what is more, beepers and mobile phones must be off during the concert.
點評:文章的用詞和句式有一定的難度,特別是關聯詞的運用,如of course, as a rule, and what is more使文章讀起來朗朗上口,層層緊扣,環環遞進,體現了作者較高的寫作技巧和水平。