英語六級作文範文精講

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　　六級作文範文精講：毅力

　　Behind eve ry great achievement in anyone ’ s life lies perseverance . We see this in every human endeavour . Out -standing sportsmen spend all their time practising . T heir endurance is beyond imagination . The same is t rue of businessmen who build up for tunes . What we usually see a re their achievements , but once we go behind the scenes we will find that they have put in a lot of continual steady ef forts . We all have read of gr ea t musicians , write rs and inventors who have cr eated or discover ed br eakthroughs in human achievement . Inva riably they have said that they owe all their success to per - severance . As to college students , quite a big number of them have become s ucces sful language lear ners through persever - ance , however , a cert ain group of them ju st stop half way and their pr evious effor ts turn out to be f ruitless .

　　Of all the countless examples the saga of Colonel Saunde rs is perhaps one of the most outstanding . The 65-yea r-old man from Kentucky had a dr eam to star t a chain of f ried chicken restaur ants all over the wor ld . To realize his dr eam, he knew that he needed a r estaurant owner to go into par tners hip with him to open the first restaur ant and to f ry chicken according to the secret recipe he had . Colonel Saunde rs had knocked on 1008 doors befor e he finally found his par tne r . It is doubtful whether many of u s would have had the pe rseverance to knock even a hundred doors .

　　From the above discu ssion we can draw a conclusion that success comes to anyone who keep s working pe rseveringly and lack of persever ance can only result in fru st ra tion and failure .

　　結構分析：

　　·In every human endeavour lies persever ance

　　* Spor tsmen pr actising all the time

　　* Bu sinessmen putting in a lot of effor ts

　　* Musicians , writ ers , inventors created break throughs

　　* College students learning a language

　　· Colonel Saunders and KFC

　　· Conclu sion

　　內容分析：

　　本文是一篇議論文。文中就“ 毅力”這一話題展開討論並發表自己的看法。第一段中第一句為主題句, 以下的論述均圍繞這一主題展開, 最後落實到學生學習一門語言必須有毅力才能成功。第二段中作者舉了一個翔實的例子, 進一步論證毅力的重要性。最後一段結論是全文的歸納。全文用詞得當, 語言流暢。

　　六級作文範文精講：失敗

　　Everyone expects to succeed in whateve r he/ she does .Unfor tunately no one is always successful in all his / her life , not even s uch gr eat people as Marx , Mao , Madam Cur rie and Einstein . Dif ferent people hold diffe rent a ttitudes towards failure. Some people become discouraged and are even defeated by failure , while some other people lea rn lessons f rom failur e and continue their effor ts .

　　There is no denying that failure is a bad thing , but“Bad things can turn to good things .”I t all depends on how we deal with it . I f we ar e pes simistic, we will lose hear t . I f we ar e optimistic, we will see hope . I really have sympathy for those who , being badly hur t by failure , lose self-confidence and confidence in life . Howeve r , I have even greate r admiration for those who , being stimula ted by failur e, go on st r aight forward to achieve succes s .

　　I believe in the saying“F ailur e is the mother of success .” If I fail , I will t ry again , I f I fail again . I will t ry and try again .

　　結構分析：

　　·對待失敗的不同態度

　　* 有些人⋯⋯

　　* 另一些人⋯⋯

　　·壞事可變成好事

　　* 悲觀者⋯⋯

　　* 樂觀者⋯⋯

　　· 我的態度

　　內容分析：

　　本文是一篇議論文。文中討論了對待失敗的兩種不同態度, 最後表明作者的態度。本文的特點在於使用了很多對比句和對比詞, 使兩種態度表現得非常鮮明, 同時也增加了議論文的力度, 如: everyone — no one, some people — some othe r people, become discouraged — learn lessons , defeat ed — continue efforts , pes simistic — optimistic , lose hea rt — see hope ,those who . . . — those who . . ., sympathy for — admir ation for , being badly hurt — being stimulaed by 等, 值得模仿。