關於春天的大學英語作文
春天，我們可以在大學校園中郊遊，可以舉辦英語作文寫作比賽。下面是小編給大家整理的，供大家參閱!
：春天的景色
Spring is no longer that shy girl in my memory, who came very late, hesitated in the distance, overwhelmed by shyness until I waved to her. Then she would scurry happily nearer, stop feet away, waiting to be hugged. But here and now, she, at the sight of me, grabs my hands and pulls me into her arms before I know what's happening.
So here I am, a boy accustomed to the drab and dry and dreary spring of the north, devouring the sweetness of a south
It rained days ago and everything glistens with moisture.Trees grow with new leaves of lively light green, not the dull and dusty color of winter. Several cherries are in full blossom now, with flowers clustering and squeezing and squabbling on the twigs. What attract me most are the meadows, the greenish yellow meadows.
Sprawling on the meadows with grasses kissing my face, I can hear the rustling of leaves in the brisk breeze, the whispering and chuckling and bickering of birds, and the trotting, shuffling, tramping of people passing by.
I can smell the refreshing fragrance that pervades the air,fragrance of flowering magnolias and growing grasses and moist soil. I inhale the fresh air as deeply as I can and the aroma in vades my whole being.
Also, I can see the fallen leaves of platanes wafting around like butterflies flying from one flower to another. Once so high above on the treetops enduring the trials of bitter cold and blustering gale, they are so easily torn loose by a warm breeze.Why?
I cannot help thinking of our situation. We Chinese defy any powerful enemy, but how come we have been so easily attacked by SARS?
簡 評
本文通過一個來自北方的男孩的視野，描繪了生機盎然的江南之春。文章一開始，作者就把春天比做一個女孩。在作者的眼中，北方的春天像一個羞澀的女孩，總是姍姍來遲，而南方的春天則儼然是一個熱情奔放的女孩。這一對比非常生動。然後作者描繪了雨後的景色：綠色的樹葉、紅色的櫻桃花、綠中帶黃的草地，都被賦予人的靈性，flowers clustering and squeezing and squabbling，grasses kissing my face。作者聽到了樹葉在微風的吹拂下響起的沙沙聲，鳥兒的啼叫聲，行人的腳步聲等;聞到了花草和泥土的芳香;看到了能經受住嚴寒和大風的樹葉如蝴蝶般紛紛落下。由此作者聯想到當前的形勢：中華民族能不畏強暴，為何如此輕易地受SARS攻擊?
本文從視覺、嗅覺和聽覺三方面帶領讀者進入一個春天的世界，全方位地感受春天的氣息。文章的一大特色是作者運用了大量象聲詞，如the rustling Of leaves;the whispering and chuckling and bickering Of birds;the trotting，shuffling，tramping of peoplepassing by;blustering gale給人以身臨其境的感覺。除了貫穿全文的比喻和擬人外，作者還運用了壓頭韻alliteration的修辭手法，如the drab and dry and dreary spring Of the north;dull and dustycolor,brisk breeze等，讀來富有韻律，朗朗上口。最後，作者從觀察到的自然現象聯想到社會生活，昇華了主題。
點評教師：黃鶯
：The Booming of Spring
Spring arrives at the school in such a hurry that it is beyond anyone's expectation. After some rather cool days, the tempera ture suddenly rises up, bringing a sudden burst of heat to the whole campus. Spring is coming!
Trees, flowers, grass and people make up the whole scene on the campus. Everyone wakes up and everything is robust.The whole campus is heaped with energy.
Seeing through a thin layer of water vapor, I am surprised at what is gradually unfolded before my eyes. Look, the pear trees are covered with snow white flowers. Some other unknown flowers, pink and scarlet, give life to the brown branches of trees. The grassplots seem to have turned into emerald green overnight. Holding the tiny drops of water in the rain and rising happily towards the passer-by, the grass is showing a rather vivid feeling of spring. The booming trees along the road are trying to shake away old leaves and expecting new ones. Stepping on the fallen leaves, I am fascinated by the rhythm and the mystery of life cycle.
People in spring are as active as the surroundings. The continual rain can not stop students from studying hard. Instead, it quickens their pace of life. The sound of raindrops overwhelms the chatting of students. Colorful umbrellas set artificial separations of people. An atmosphere of study embraces the school.The early sun is an industrious reveille, urging people to be actire and diligent. Students in spring are just like early birds searching for worms. Libraries and classrooms are both nice places for study. There are crowds reading quietly in the libraries and people practicing English aloud in the corners of buildings. Astonished by so many hardworking people, I feel ashamed of wasting time wandering about.
Spring is a season of energy and hope. The booming spring on the campus comes to show us a new leaf of life.
簡 評
本文描寫了春天來臨時，校園中一派生機勃勃的景象。文章的前半部分寫景：有色彩斑斕的花朵，墨綠色的草地和茁壯生長的樹木;後半部分寫人：與自然界中的萬物在春天生命力格外旺盛一樣，莘莘學子也比其他任何時候都刻苦勤奮，整個校園中都呈現出濃濃的學習氛圍。最後一段，作者總結全文：春天是精力旺盛和充滿希望的季節。
本文存在以下不足之處：第四段中，作者的主旨是描寫人，但又不時地提到環境，如The sound of raindrops overwhelms the chatting of students.Colorful umbrellas set artificial sevaratlons of people.等，與主題句People ln spring are asactive as the surroundings無關，破壞了整個段落的統一性unity。在英語寫作中，一個段落表達一個主題，所有的支援句supporting sentences都要圍繞主題句展開。此外，最後一句a new leaf of life明顯是中式英語，可改為ushers us to a new stage of life。
點評教師：黃鶯
：Peaceful Spring
Bitterly cold winter may once come, but now it has gone.
As my bike has been stolen, I have to run from one teaching building to another every day.
The bell declares the end of the last lesson and the beginning of a new journey. Tired as I am, at the sight of the bench, I go straight to it. As soon as I get seated, a world of fresh green immediately catches my eyes. Grass sprouts burst through the soil right in the place of the withered grass and turn the dull grey into fresh green. As I look up, I find those tall trees have also put on new clothes. Green, here and there, everywhere!Spring has come, I realize suddenly.
A breeze stirs, sending over breaths of fragrance. I trace it,surprised to find several lovely small white flowers dotted on a tree. And there are even some singing birds! I am so delighted with all these tiny lives that my fatigue vanishes all of a sudden.
The sky shows its purest blue. The sun generously gives out its heat and light, shining evenly on the grass, on the trees,on the roofs of houses, on the people passing by, also on me,quietly and tenderly. There come a couple of young people,strolling leisurely. A group of students are sitting in a circle on the grass and discussing something heatedly. Some are reading English but in low voices afraid of breaking the peace of the campus. Others are lying on the lawn, having a nap, or just enjoying the sunshine as I am.
I feel I am free, free of thinking anything. In such a pleasing environment, doing anything is a great pleasure. I am fully indulged in this tranquility. If only time could stop!
I turn on the radio to enjoy some light music. Much to my disappointment, however, almost all the programs are about the war in Iraq. It is hard to believe that under the same blue sky,some people are suffering from bleeding and death of war while others are enjoying a happy life.
The sun is hidden by the clouds. After a few seconds, it shines brightly again.
Peaceful life seems to have gone, but it will come back one day, I am sure.
簡 評
本文中，作者描述了在草地的長凳上小憩片刻時的所見所聞，充滿了生活的氣息。跟隨著作者的目光，我們看到了破土而出的一片嫩綠，預示著春天的來臨;微風送來芬芳的花兒，唱歌的小鳥，湛藍的天空，柔和的陽光。然後，看到了來往的人們，有悠閒散步的情侶，圍坐一群的學生，有的在朗讀英語，有的在草地上小憩片刻。作者感受到了一片安寧。收音機中播報的有關伊拉克戰事的訊息讓作者聯想到在同一片藍天之下，有些人在享受生活，而有些人飽受著戰亂之苦。文章的結尾頗蘊哲理：正如烏雲散去後就有陽光普照，和平總有一天會來臨。
本文好似信筆拈來，但字裡行間充滿了作者對生活的感悟，流露出對戰爭的厭惡和對和平與安寧的生活的嚮往。
點評教師：黃鶯
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