2015中考優秀作文開頭結尾
2015中考優秀作文開頭結尾
一般來說,文章的開頭應儘量做到“開門見山”,即要用簡單明瞭的語言引出文章的話題,使人一開始就能瞭解文章要說明的內容。
一. 開頭經典句型
1、對於敘事類的文章,可以在開頭把人物、時間、事件和環境交代清楚。
如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開頭可以是:Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
2、對於論述性的文章,可以在開頭處先闡明自己的觀點,接著展開進一步的論述。
如“The Time and the Money (時間和金錢)” 的開頭可以是:Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don't think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back, but……
3、在描述事件或遊記類的文章中,採用回憶性的開頭往往更能吸引人的眼球。這種型別的開頭中通常含有描述自己心情或情緒的'詞彙,如never forget(永遠無法忘記)、 remember (記得)、unforgettable(難以忘懷的)、 exciting(令人激動的)、surprising(令人驚訝的)、sad (難過的)……
如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開頭還可以這樣寫:I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.
4、在敘事類或論述性的文章中,都可採用疑問型開頭,這樣既可以吸引閱卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。
如“Planting Trees(種樹)”的開頭可以是:Have you ever planted trees? Don't you think planting trees is ……
再如“Traveling Abroad(出國之旅)”的開頭可以是:If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?
5、有的文章,特別是敘事類的文章中,可以採用倒敘的寫作手法,先寫出事件的結果,再陳述過程。
如“Catching Thieves (捉賊)”的開頭可以這樣寫:I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It's a ... story.
二、結尾經典句型
1、隨著文章的結束,文章自然而然地結尾。
如“Helping the Policeman (幫助警察)”的結尾可以是:The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.
再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龜兔賽跑)” 的結尾可以是:When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。
2、昇華主題在文章的結尾
可以用含義較深的話點明主題,深化主題,起到“畫龍點睛”的效果。
如“I Love My Hometown(我愛家鄉)”的結尾可以是:I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.
3、反問結尾,引起深思
這種方式的結尾雖然形式是問句,但意義卻是肯定的,而且具有一定的強調作用,可引起他人的深思。
如 “Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (學英語能為我們帶來許多樂趣)” 的結尾可以是:If we learn English well, we can …Don't you think learning English is great fun?
4、表達祝願,闡述願望
這種方式的結尾常出現在書信或的文體中,表示對他人的祝福或對將來的展望等。
如“A Letter to the Farmers(給農民們的一封信)”的結尾可以是:I hope the farmers' life will be better and better.
另外,書信的結尾常有以下形式的:Best wishes; I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year; I wish you have a good time等。